Friday, March 20, 2009

Her Mysterious Death

Her death was due to mysterious circumstances. I was assigned to solve this big case. I am detective Brian Manjarrez, and i have been solving case's since i was very young boy. It was saturday, it was warm it wasn't cold it was just a beutiful day and i was walking my dog named detective spanky because you know that if you dont have a dog with you that is trainned you ain't a real spy.



So as i was saying i was walking my dog spanky until i got a call from officer:Sanchez Saying that they had found a death body of a women. So i tell him how sad is that so i tell him ok officer:Sanchez i'll be there in an insteant so i got to the place when into the forest and there i see the death body dropped in the grass that was like one of the worse death bodies i had ever seen in my whole life. So then officer:



Sanchez asked me if i could please help the city of chicago with this big crime and so i said sure why not thats what my job's about so i started checking for finger prints while my little partner Spanky was sniffing for clue's to the crime as soon as Spanky saw the death body dropped in the middle of the forest so he started sniffin for foot prints and so followed them to this big wood house and so we knocked on the door and so nobody answer so we whent in the house and as soon as we whent in we looked at the walls and we seen death bodies glued to the wall and bodies tight upside down.


So we found out that were the criminal takes the death bodies at so we whent back to the death body and we checked the body for finger prints. And so we found some all over her body so i searched up the finger prints and the criminal's record came up and it came up to be some guy named after a nick name negro and it said. That this guy was put on a menatl hospital and so we called the hospital and the hospital told us that he had esaped to watch it with him because he is very dangerous.


And so now we know who the killer really is and what he is up to. So then i called officer:Sanchez told him who this criminal was so i told him the plan and so he told me wait there i'll be there right now. So He came and so we where hiden waiting for the killer to show up for we could arrest him. So it was midnight and so the killer showed up to pick up the death body so thats when officer:Sanchez showed up to him pointing a gun at him and told him that he was been arrested for murder so he puts him in handcops and takes him in. So then we where rewarded $1000 from the police department not only that we where named one of the best detectives in the world. So thats where it all ended the criminal was arrested and then sent to a mental hospital right where he belongs fellas.

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