Friday, April 17, 2009

The Curious Case Of Benjamin Button,Chapters 8- the end

Family:Is good at the beginning because they where both young but the thing is that each year she gets older and he is till young but family in the story is more like not so good because they are not communicating as much as they use to and is going to be harder for this family to be with each other for ever because of how she is getting she don't want to do anything but sleep all day. the only reason why i think he is till with his kid.


Age:I think that when there talking about age in this story there trying to give the reader and example of how life is if you are dating and older person than you in the story it all started with the girl dragging the guy to party's and stuff because they were both young but she was older than him so she was getting older and it all started to change because now is him that wants to do stuff that she don't want to do because of her age. so then i think that this relation ship aint gunna last.




Beauty:In the story beuty is getting pretty like this boy he was old and he kept on getting younger each year and his wife was getting older and older each year and he was not that attracted to his wife any more because she was getting older and he whanted to have fun and she didn't want to do anything any more because of her age all she really whanted to do was sleep all day and lay down in the bed.




Thursday, April 16, 2009

The Curious Case Of Benjamin Button,Chapters 3-7

After reading chapters 3-7, predict three problems you think Benjamin will encounter and give your solutions for each.

I think that Benjamin will stop loving his wife and will end up leavin her because each and every year he is gettin younger and she is gettin older than him and because he is young he would whanna do more of young people things that she would not like to do all she whould whanna do more of old people things. My solution is that i would leave her because she is gettin old and we wount have the same taste no more.

Another thing that might happen is that when he is out there having fun doing things that young people like to do he might fall in love with other girl his age but then he would not be able 2 get with her because he is married. My solution to this is if that happened to me what i would do is just listen to my heart and go with the person i love.

Another thing that could happen is that like each year he gets young and she gets older and like he is young he is going to be more on having fun than to be with his kid and like she is gettin older she is going to pass the weight and when then the baby wun't have nobody to take care of him. If i was him i would forget al about having fun and spend time with my baby because he is gunna grow up with nobody to raise him up.

Tuesday, March 24, 2009

The Secret

It was my best friends deepest, darkest secret and it would be a hard one to keep. She had made me promis her that i wasn't going to tell nobody so i tell her don't worry i ain't gunna tell nobody i promise you. She told me her mom already knew about this but she told me she needed a friend to talk to so she picked me because i know her since i was was 7 years old and she knows i dont be spraying out rumers even if we get into arguments.


So i go like ok is it that bad and she say's nope its not bad like in the way if i did something bad nope so she goes all like i am pregnant with one of your friends and so i go like naw and so she tells me yeah i swear of god so then she starts telling me can you please help me contact him because he needs to know that he is having a kid but she goe's all like im scared that he might not whanna be responsible and take care of me and the baby.

So i tell don't worry just think positive think that he is going to be with you and our baby so she goe's like yeah your rite so i go like yeah let me call him up and let him know that you whanna meet up with him because you need to talk to him about something aight and she tells me ok she goes like see i knew i count with you because your alway's there for me when i need you and so i tell her thats what friends are for rite and she just start's to smile.

Ok so i call up clever because thats my friends baby daddy of so i hit him up and he picks up and so i tell him hey clever there's some body here with me that whants to meet up with you and so he goes all like aight i'll be there in 10 minutes. So then i tell her what he says and gets all happy and starts to jump up and down so i just sit down in the bench and whatch how happy she is ok so the 10 minutes had past already so he gets here and he see's her and everything rite he goes all like see i knew you where gonna look for me girl and so rufina tells clever we need to talk and he goes all like oooo for show and so rufina tells clever that she is pregnant with his kid and as soon as clever heard that he started deniying his baby for like 6 months.

Then after all that time clever whent looking for rufina and so he found her and he was crying to her and he even apologized to her and she accepted he's apology and so clever started showing everybody that dat was he's baby and so clever and rufina got merried and lived happy for there entired life and then everytime i would see rufina she would go like i did the rite thing by tellin you my secret.

Friday, March 20, 2009

Her Mysterious Death

Her death was due to mysterious circumstances. I was assigned to solve this big case. I am detective Brian Manjarrez, and i have been solving case's since i was very young boy. It was saturday, it was warm it wasn't cold it was just a beutiful day and i was walking my dog named detective spanky because you know that if you dont have a dog with you that is trainned you ain't a real spy.



So as i was saying i was walking my dog spanky until i got a call from officer:Sanchez Saying that they had found a death body of a women. So i tell him how sad is that so i tell him ok officer:Sanchez i'll be there in an insteant so i got to the place when into the forest and there i see the death body dropped in the grass that was like one of the worse death bodies i had ever seen in my whole life. So then officer:



Sanchez asked me if i could please help the city of chicago with this big crime and so i said sure why not thats what my job's about so i started checking for finger prints while my little partner Spanky was sniffing for clue's to the crime as soon as Spanky saw the death body dropped in the middle of the forest so he started sniffin for foot prints and so followed them to this big wood house and so we knocked on the door and so nobody answer so we whent in the house and as soon as we whent in we looked at the walls and we seen death bodies glued to the wall and bodies tight upside down.


So we found out that were the criminal takes the death bodies at so we whent back to the death body and we checked the body for finger prints. And so we found some all over her body so i searched up the finger prints and the criminal's record came up and it came up to be some guy named after a nick name negro and it said. That this guy was put on a menatl hospital and so we called the hospital and the hospital told us that he had esaped to watch it with him because he is very dangerous.


And so now we know who the killer really is and what he is up to. So then i called officer:Sanchez told him who this criminal was so i told him the plan and so he told me wait there i'll be there right now. So He came and so we where hiden waiting for the killer to show up for we could arrest him. So it was midnight and so the killer showed up to pick up the death body so thats when officer:Sanchez showed up to him pointing a gun at him and told him that he was been arrested for murder so he puts him in handcops and takes him in. So then we where rewarded $1000 from the police department not only that we where named one of the best detectives in the world. So thats where it all ended the criminal was arrested and then sent to a mental hospital right where he belongs fellas.

Tuesday, February 17, 2009

The Best Day Ever

The best day i ever had was the first day i whent to Six Flags because i couldn't wait to get on the rides it was so cool like that was the coolest day of my life i whent on almost every ride except for the superman. It was so fun that day we had food that day i shared time with my family all my cuzins whent tias my uncles everybody whent and the only reason they took me to Six Flags was because it was my birth day. But i had forgott i know i know u guys are woundering how would i forgett about my own birth day but hey ima human people forgett about things you know but yeah as i was saying. I had forgott about my birth day so then i whent on this ride called the Iron Wolf and when we got off we didn't see nobody so we were waiting and then this staff guy who works there told us to go with him that he will take us where they are and all we saw was my whole family jumping up and down screaming Happy Birthday. Man i was so happy i felt like i had won! the lottery Ticket everybody started giving me presents man that was so coool. And then we all still had fun and we whent on the rides so many times man we didn't leave until they closed it.

Wednesday, February 11, 2009